- there are as many stories in this world as there are people -
Hmm good.. didnt know you still blogged :P
Gr8 .... :) Innumm niraiya ezhuthungaa
pros: good thinking... insightful and the best part of your story is its ending which i have to say you managed quite okay. cons: you still translate a sentence from your mother tongue to english. like the use of "that too", in hindi its called "wo bhi". you still need to improve a lot. there were also many typos you need to check up on.. but i will stop here. keep on writing you can do much better.
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