Sunday, 18 October 2009

காத்திருங்கள் :)

எனது முதல் தமிழ் பதிப்பு ... விரைவில்..


Daisy Blue said...

Hmm good.. didnt know you still blogged :P

Sivashunmuga said...

Gr8 .... :) Innumm niraiya ezhuthungaa

utsav ghosh said...

pros: good thinking... insightful and the best part of your story is its ending which i have to say you managed quite okay.

cons: you still translate a sentence from your mother tongue to english. like the use of "that too", in hindi its called "wo bhi". you still need to improve a lot. there were also many typos you need to check up on.. but i will stop here. keep on writing you can do much better.